關(guān)于家的中考英語作文(關(guān)于中考英語作文點(diǎn)評)
關(guān)于家的中考英語作文
關(guān)于家的中考英語作文
關(guān)于家的中考英語作文
家對我意義重大。「不管家是多么簡陃，家是世界上最好的地方?！刮艺湟暭彝嘏?，并且認(rèn)為家是世界上最光輝的地方之一。
每當(dāng)我在日常生活中遭遇到困難、失敗甚至挫折時(shí)，家就是我尋求庇護(hù)之所。在家中，我親愛的父母和兄弟姊妹會(huì)安慰我a、鼓勵(lì)我。而有了他們的關(guān)心與鼓舞，我將恢復(fù)自信，并能鼓能我的所有的力量和勇氣，來面對嚴(yán)酷的生活現(xiàn)實(shí)。對我而言，家永遠(yuǎn)是一種喜悅，我總是可以在其中找到愛、了解、關(guān)懷與幫助。
home means a lot to me. be it ever so humble, there is no place like home. i appreciate the warmth of my home, and regard it as one of the brightest and dearest spots on earth.
it is the place where i can take refuge whenever i meet with difficulties, failures and even frustrations in my daily life. at home, my dear parents and brothers and sisters will comfort me and cheer me up. and with their concern and encouragement, i will regain my self-confidence and muster up all my strength and courage to face the stern realities of life. to me, home is forever a joy where i can always find love, understanding, care and help.
關(guān)于中考英語作文點(diǎn)評
關(guān)于中考英語作文點(diǎn)評
英語寫作：中考英語作文點(diǎn)評 “night”指代不明
寫作是一項(xiàng)能夠充分考查學(xué)生語言綜合運(yùn)用能力的題型，也是中考中失分較多的一題。不少考生在練習(xí)英語寫作時(shí)不得法，又苦于找不到提高的有效途徑?？v觀近年各地中考英語寫作題，題材一般是寫人、寫事、寫物、寫景、日記、書信、通知、便條等文體。一般來說，不同的寫作題材，它的'人物，時(shí)間，寫作的重點(diǎn)也是不盡相同的，但學(xué)生在寫作過程中所犯的錯(cuò)誤卻基本一致。筆者在批閱2007年中考英語作文中發(fā)現(xiàn)諸多考生的作文出現(xiàn)了這樣那樣的問題，我們先看下面考生的作文.
例： (2007年山東棗莊)以“Chinese Spring Festival”為題，寫一篇短文。
考生作文
Chinese Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is China’s importantest① festival. It’s the longest holidays②. Most people go back home to get together with their families③.
Before the festival，people are busy prepare④ for it- buying things and cleaning the houses.On the night⑤，the whole family usually celebrate it，for example，they always playing firecrackers，eating delicious foods， watching TV and playing mah-jong and so on.During the festival， they visit friends and relatives， saying “Happy New Year” to each other，and go to park or temple fairs together .People also put on new clothes，and they say “Happy New Year” to each other，visit friends and relatives and go to park or temple fairs⑥. On New Year’s Day ， people often eat delicious food jiaozi. Jiaozi can be made by most people including the old and the kids。
I like jiaozi very much.What about you?